Edit Second Draft

Coming up with a style that feels organic to your film is a bit hard, even with inspiration from other documentaries. 

You need to make something that feels right for you that also won't bore the audience.

Music is another important factor, it makes the audience feel how you want them to feel, it's almost like the soul of the film.

Also I edited a rough cut to get an idea of the narrative of the story but after a discussion with my tutor we decided we need to make the documentary pull you in more, so we changed the edit.

The second draft of the edit is more inviting and aesthetically pleasing and over all a better documentary and adding music really transformed the film